It was good! this stanza
All I do is sit,
And cry my days away.
Hoping that my pain,
Isn't here to stay.

was a little rocky but it was good! and on;ce again full of emotion i loved the first stanza too! 5/5 for usre!

Hey girl! Great poem!! I love the working, and the first stanza!! A-Mazing!!!! Great job!!! Love lots!!