The dark side of the moon

I really like this poem.

The ending line didn't seem to fit very well. You're word usage could have been a touch better but still it was a nice write. Interesting title. As I said it was a nice write.
~A&C

Nice poem flowed very good 5/5

Wow...ur 16? That was beautifully deep. Your ideas are profound. I do think you could come up with more creative word usage but other than that...it was superb. Because of its depth I had to give it a 5/5

Again, I like how it's short and simple and goes right to the pont.

My favourite lines were:

"
The dark side of the moon
is where the worlds fears are hidden
no one wants to think of it
and talk of its forbidden

no one wants to hear
of all the tears and all the lies
and no one wants to know
any of the hows and the whys"

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