I love your concept, and your style, it could use a little light clean-up work, but nothing to worry too much about. Well done.

Love can be oh so tragic....sad...but lovely...i like the way you used irony as part of your poem...keep it up...:D

The last 4 paragraph things got to me...i really love it and i love the way that u write your poems...keep up the great work...5/5 once again