Sorry World

by Princess09   Sep 1, 2005


I'm losing my mind
it's going so fast
the bloods all around
and everythging's turning black

the knife's on the floor
and the paramedics are here
i want to know what happened
so many things i fear

they said i did it
just a little too deep
i did not want to die
but now i'm in an eternal sleep

i want to scream
but nothing comes out
i need to cry
and try to shout

no one can hear me
and no one knows
i want to take it back
but it does not show

i'm closing my eyes now
and falling fast
into this deep hole
that i cannot get past

i want my mommy
but her i cannot find
i need my daddy
but i only hear him in my far off mind

i'm going now
without saying good-bye
i'm sorry world
for making you cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Another very well written poem =) yoiu have a lot of talent.. you can certainly express your feelings and turn it into poetry.. this poem had so much emotion to it as did all of the poem i have read! once again i loved the title you chose for your poem.. very deep and creative. keep it up =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey, that was a very deep and touching poem. great work mate, keeo it up!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    Ur talented! they way u conveyed the feelings and thoughts of someone dying was amazing! even tho noone really knows how it feels, ur view seems possible! very sad but flowed beautifully

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    This is probably my favorite.......it pulled me in from that start it was great and so sad but still so great.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    I understand your poem so well, its reminds me of myself in a lot of ways. Its great. Keep up the good work. If your not busy go check out some of my poems. I just put them on this website. Never shared mine before.

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