Omgosh...such an awesome and meaningful poem. good job

Wow great job on expressing yourself on such a terrible topic.. its just so true so many people were lost that day and all of us will never forget the day that the earth stood still and watched in fear as we saw the planes crashing into the buildings. And everyone i know knew someone that they lost or someone that had lost someone. So just a great job and i will def. never forget. I abs loved ur poem 5/5.

OMG this poem is amazing you really captured the emotions of a mother on one of the planes that hit the towers... well done 5/5

Oh...9/11 was horrible and i still have nightmares now.
what a bad situation.

sammi

Very good poem M'Dear.

I see that your submission date was September 1st. I think this poem would a make a bigger hit if it was submitted on September 11th.

"but i an slipping "

I think you meant "am". =)

"some daddys are here too
and crying for help
who ever said men don't cry
this pain they have not felt"

This stanza was my favourite.

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