Red Water

Wow.
Although it's not as good as your other earlier work.
It's still impressive.
5/5
~Wings

Aww how sad:( congrats on gettin 2nd in that 1 gurls contest i took over. this is so good 5/5

This is a really sad poem. I liked how you kept it short and compact yet still had alot to say. The rhyming was mostly good though I thought the last couple of lines sounded a bit forced, maybe using the same rhyme but changing the context would work? I liked the rhythm in this and how every line flowed onto the next nicely. The title is also quite creative. My fav line would be 'what once was blue turned a violent red.' because it's quite a graphic description but is stated as if it is perfectly natural and I like the contrasts of it. Congrats for the special award in the poetry contest :)

Awesome write... touching
5/5
love
amy

So sad - Great poem - short, but really hits home with the power of the last few lines. Well written.

Peace. [Sole]