by Sean Dohr Sep 1, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Letter in the mail, |
Short and sweet i like it. |
Aw. sad yet interesting. i like how all of it rhymed at the end, i did that once, but urs is a lot better. 5/5 |
by Sole
Short - but well written. It shocks the reader, hits them suddenly, like the truth does to you sometimes. I hope it's not (or wasn't) true. xXx. All the best. |
by Clarissa
Aww well if this is true then im terribly sorry =[ |
by Adriana
Oh my god i am about to cry! Now I know even though this is a small poem it tells so much...my dads in jail though...(tear) |