Oh my god i am about to cry! Now I know even though this is a small poem it tells so much...my dads in jail though...(tear)

Aww well if this is true then im terribly sorry =[
good poem too

Short - but well written. It shocks the reader, hits them suddenly, like the truth does to you sometimes. I hope it's not (or wasn't) true. xXx. All the best.

Peace. [Sole]

Aw. sad yet interesting. i like how all of it rhymed at the end, i did that once, but urs is a lot better. 5/5

Short and sweet i like it.
5/5
I like how every line rhymed with the last one, very different to what Im used to.
~Wings