Nature's not really my thing.. But this is good! Well done, Nice Writing

Wow...great poem the word choice is amazing u vividly described the experience i felt as though i was right there on the island i also like how u started each stanza with one word...the only thing was the end was shorter with les description, but i liked that contrast to the rest of the poem...def 5/5

Beautifully written poem, I read it twice.
keep up the excellent poetry.