Awesome poem! i loved the wording 5/5 you have a great talent keep it up

Nice job. I can't even compare my poems to yours. =)

My favourite lines are:

"But now it's burned out
The fire could never burn
We went down the wrong road
And took the wrong turn"

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wonderful! no one can't bring truth out better than that. keep writing.:)