I think it's nice and i feel this way too. I love the whole poem, i never cry in front of the guy i love cause i don't want him to feel bad for making me cry, i still love him though eventhough he loves another. |
Oh, shouldn't your title be I'm still weak. |
That was a great poem. wow your only 12 and you write that good. im 26 and cant seem to write anymore. but you r great so keep it up....huggs...missy |
by --*arlene*--
Wow!!Im 13 well im going to turn 14 but you have so much talent ...I love writing too but like they never come out the way i want it to...:( lol n*e ways good job and keep it up.... |
by Emma
I love this one...good job morgan you are seriously so talented : ) |
by Macy
Great! i love this. one of my favorites. shit...i wish i could write like you, |
by Falling Up
Wow. this is a pretty good poem. ive gone through this situation MANY TIMEs. as u can probably tell by my poetry, its mostly about boys and mostly heartbreak.. not all though. but still, for your age, you will have many more to come, and thus, much more inspiration to write about it. i really liked this poem, because it brought back what i thought were forgotten feelings. it reminded me that nomatter how much i try to forget a situation of the past, it still lingers, just hidden. keep up the good work! |