by Clarissa Sep 2, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
-- I don't know where i was goin with this something i needed to get out -- |
I know how it feels to know your poem isnt going anywhere but you just want to let things out, you stilll did awesome! its usually the after math when yo ucan really start writing about how it felt, great job! 5/5 |
by Angie
Great poem! i really luved it! It also had a wonderful flow to it! u did a great job! keep up da awesome work! 5/5 |
Very good, the lines blend well and the structure is fine, with a good ryming scheme as well. I like this a lot, the way you wrote it seemed a little bit ordinary, but it still expressed itself well. 4/5, but the computer said I already voted. don't know whats up with that. good job! |
by ASPHYXIATED
Flow was good, Meaning was great I understand completely. |
by Melanie
Very nice i can totally understand the same thinhg happend to me but just wait and see aybe hes not write for you or maybe he is who knows very nicely writtin good job i like your poems alot |