Comments : Falling to Deep

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    This was a great poem, I loved the flow. I know how you feel, if you two were ment to be, you will.

  • 19 years ago

    by Melanie

    Very nice i can totally understand the same thinhg happend to me but just wait and see aybe hes not write for you or maybe he is who knows very nicely writtin good job i like your poems alot

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Flow was good, Meaning was great I understand completely.
    Word usage was easy to follow yet good..I really liked this one well done.. Not confusing at all. all in all great write well done x)

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Very good, the lines blend well and the structure is fine, with a good ryming scheme as well. I like this a lot, the way you wrote it seemed a little bit ordinary, but it still expressed itself well. 4/5, but the computer said I already voted. don't know whats up with that. good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Great poem! i really luved it! It also had a wonderful flow to it! u did a great job! keep up da awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    I know how it feels to know your poem isnt going anywhere but you just want to let things out, you stilll did awesome! its usually the after math when yo ucan really start writing about how it felt, great job! 5/5