Awwwwwwwwwwww! ur so sweet! you wrote a poem for the unrequited one! Yes, i love all his poems too, he is very talented, and so r you! That was really nice of you to write him something:)
*****weeeping wolf

I love this poem it is so SWEET!!

**Thanks for the comments**

*~Jamie~*

Good read,.. the first stanza is a fairly decent beginning, and it seems u dont keep the quality up from there on out..

(which have been empty for much too long)..

liked that line..

The unrequited one will be without his "un"

good concept, yet even as it flows and rhymes, it seems a bit awkward to me.. oh well, i cant think of a better way to put it. the next stanza has the lines

The unrequited will at last be requited of his faithful love

and thats pretty redundant,.. you're saying the same thing in two different ways. in this example, to me, it's quite unneeded. the variances in the way you say it aren't really all that grand, so, it seems like a waste of space.. overall good piece,.. i liked the un- idea... its always fun to play with words like that. keep doing that but in different ways of course.. the form was lacking, but a lot of my poems lack structure as well. u just gotta know how to work with your words to make it flow and sound right.. did a good job with that.. 4/5.. pZ out

=) great job I love this one~ yes, someday I'm sure he'll be unrequited... without the "UN" lol

Good write, enjoyable and it's awesome that you wrote a poem for him

Its been awhile hasn't it blush? Ah well, This one is really something, its great how you put in hope as a theme. Anyway, its a great poem (no surprise there), see ya later. ^_^x