I personally like poems that rhyme but you still did a good job expressing your feelings in this poem!

I like the way this one went. I would change a couple of things, and also correct the spelling. Possibly stanzas, but then again, it didn't rhyme. So, spacing it out isn't really needed in my opinion. It flowed even though it didn't really rhyme. All in all, I enjoyed it. =) And thanks for the comments on mine.
-Ally

Very sweet. 5/5, Em x