by Avrii Monrielle Sep 2, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
When all of us were still kids |
by Poetess Lana
Wow, you are very descriptive with your poetry, and this speaks with a lot of wisdom. I loved it, great imagery, very flowy. 5/5! |
Wow |
by Vegetable
His is very good, It's tragic when children loose their "wonder" good job. |
by Rachel
This is really...amazing! usually i dont like poems that dont rhyme this much. But this one really touched me..Great job...~Rach |
by Ariana
Wow this is really really good, def 5/5. Your language is quite mature for your age. I can relate to this alot, except I still act like a kid more than I need to, just because I can. LOL. |