The Flower

by M MEM   Sep 3, 2005


The morbid flower is layed down,
Blending into the carpet of its brothers,
They are rained upon with tears,
But the tears dry,
The flowers wilt,
And the grave,
Is forever.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    It was bueatiful.. i really liked it..
    fello hippie lol
    xox Bam
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like the style...a little confusing, but good use of words and I agree, very powerful lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Ooo what a powerful image! I like the idea alot. Maybe try and make it a little longer, go into more detail. Just a suggestion, good work overall

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Ok this one i dont quite understand. sry

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