Comments : Drifting about

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Good work...I like the ending the most...you sure have a way of writing death...

    "As you walk down the road you ones knew and loved." - *once (knew and loved)

    "Now filled with toucher, blood, and body's all around you." - *bodies

    "You lie there to hungry to go on." -
    *too (hungry...)

    "Dieing of thist and slowly withering away." -
    *thirst

    Keep writing :)

    xxx