by Clarissa Sep 3, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As you try to fight your feelings, with your mind telling you to give up it’s your heart that won’t let you. But the real reason it won’t let you give up is because the hearts desire yearns for them. Unfortunately we aren’t really brave to stand up to that part of you saying “Move onâ€, but you can’t move on until you know they don’t love you too. Because if you don’t your heart is unresolved not knowing what to do… except just love and love and to not give up. |
by Nicholle
-sigh- I'd enjoy an emo mix tape right about now |
Not bad, the format is similer to that of "My Faith", so I don't down-point for that, but the subject was unclear and the lines didn't blend well. nice try, 3/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
As far as love for me, I have love, but I don’t know who I should give it you? |