Wow, amazingly written!! i cant really think of anything to say to help this cuz it was amazing all the way! so i'm just ganna say this, awesome job! 5/5!
Trav

Such a sad poem . Thanks for commenting on mine but I do have a sad poem it's called Katrina's wrath but alot of people don't seem to be interested in the sad things in this world ...Just can't understand it...Keep up the great work!!!