Renewed

by rick   Sep 3, 2005


I stared at this screen for hours on end. it was a shock when it happened.
i got this message sharing a note.
we got to talking and then i wrote,
why do i feel the way i do?
why do i need to share my mind with you?
can you answer or hear my plea? or can you be with me?
she answered back just as quick as i could say it
she said that we would never split.
thought my feelings have been destroyed
those cold nights, feeling so toyed
but this womans different
she makes me feel whole
those others, heh. some looked like trolls.
the age where i become a man is at hand. its time i made a stand
i told her this while i made the deal
my life is alot like a wheel
it spins to give back what was taken, don't make me regret this or feel forsaken
she said just a calm as a breeze,
ill put your mind to ease
days went by and we grew close
shes the one i love the most
we share our minds and share the telephone line,
i cant wait till shes all mine

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Kline

    Hey there!!! I really loved this poem i wish the guy that i was dating would have read this poem before he broke it off. Keep up the great work i think you are great and you have some great poems.

    ttyl

    email me sometime
    kensshortychick@webtv.net

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Awww, this is such a cute and swet poem...I just love it! Its one of the best poems I have read...I read a lot! Keep up the good work...you put everything into this poem and its just so honest and true. Nice job 5/5!