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by *secrets* Sep 4, 2005 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Slit my wrists- Think of you Look what you've done- But who cares- we're through Blood pours down my elbow I'm getting a high right now hope mum doesn't open my door coz she'll have a flipping cow she'll yell at me to tell her why I'm doing this and i'm just gonna ignore her like she gives a piss coz she put me through hell when ever i went out who is it this time? I don't want you sleeping about! Called me a tart slapped me down, but you did much worse, sent me flying to the ground whenever i did something, you didn't like, not join you on your drink- drive rampage on your moterbike but now you'll have to torment someone else, because I'm going away up above and around the coner going on a holiday but boo-hoo for you, I won't be coming back coz I'll be up in heaven never coming back.. PLease give me coments and feedback!!
by Amy
Nice work dont try 2 rhyme if it just ait gonna work thou well constructed amy
by My lOvE iS EnDleSs 2 bAd u dOnT SeE dAt
This a deep poem
by danielle
I really likes it...some of the rym's seemed a little forced but it was really good