A very hard and honest write. Compelling with much empathy.

You have a real talent for imagery...Writing something so hard I admire you for.

Please check out my latest work, "devils delight" It was also very hard for me to write this. Let me know what you think.

Kisses
Hayley

Awesome poem, I really like the way you wrote the last three lines.
A 'stalking' memory is surprisingly easy to understand... 5/5