Wow i loved it
i could feel something inside me keep it up

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love andrea xxxx

"The darkness stares at me
Trying to make me give in
I can feel it's hostility
Like I've committed a sin"

i love that stanza!! brilliant poem, keep it up!
-xXx-

This is great! i loved the first stanza! and the last it was probley the best i think..i loved the first because its said that if your falling in a dream and you hit the end you die..strange :|
This was very well written I think your growing as a writer! well done xxx

I liked this poem n i like your "skills" lol awsome write ne ways~ i def jus saw that comment you left last month on that every waking moment poem thanks* thats nice of ya.