The Immensity of Emptiness

by HansRik   Sep 4, 2005


An hollow heart, and empty of love,
But full of dirous, dreadful dreams.

A heart that taintly loved,
A heart that faintly dreamt of love,
A heart of wrathful passions,
A heart that burns with its own fiery intentions,
Leaving no more than a barren set of ashen ruins.

Such is the immensity of emptiness.

The heart that expires its bloody tears cries its past, its love:
A set of futile memories which stroked its loathsome soul.

And thus the heart remains be-lied,
Believing that 'twas full of fiery love,
Not realising that 'tis full of empty ice.

And this is the immensity of emptiness
That passions bygone, and love be-thought caress'd.

(C)Copyright 2005
(Hans Rik- nom de plume)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Wow... gawd the word choice really penetraed my mind... so deep and depressing... all i can say is AMAZING. i rated 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Great work, keep it up.

    5/5
    Darkest Wishes,
    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really lovely work. I liked the second stanza best - it really captured what you are talking about nicely. I also liked these lines 'The heart that expires its bloody tears cries its past, its love:
    A set of futile memories which stroked its loathsome soul.' The imagery in these was very stong.

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Thanx for commenting on my poems last time.. i can relate to this poem so much..short but meaningfull nice 5/5 for sure

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really liked this, you have a unique style unlike anything I've read before.

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