Really nice poem...so touching and easy to relate! 5/5 Great job! :-)

Awe sweetie
that was a great poem i loved it
keep it up
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Very toucghin.. makes me feel better than someone out there in the world also feels the way i do....
im glad i read this poem its beautiful

Wish i coujld write like you could ^_^ have yet another 5

Wow. I can't beleive this, this is similer to something i've been trying to write. that astounds me, as that we would think alike, even if it is only partially so. The words just make me melt, and I feel like some of it's inside of me. To hit my emotions in a way such as this impresses me to no end. I must give you 5/5, with no question in my mind.

You write so pretty!! i just like looking at the words even if it takes me quite some time to piece everything together cause i'm not quite up to your level!!! your so great i love your writing. but this has to be one of my favorites i love the subject the wording the flow absolutly everyting. incredible 5/5

Nicely put, I had to read it a second time to heart it more. I have no complaints but compliments.

"And thus the heart remains be-lied,
Believing that 'twas full of fiery love,
Not realising that 'tis full of empty ice."

This was my favourite stanza. "be-lied"..."believe"...nice. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Yes, I liked the old language in it, and the feeling, all made a nice poem.
I wonder if you've ever written anything in plain language? No offense, but perhaps you should try some more styles...just an idea.

Good Writing!
beth

I liked the structure of this poem and how it isn't restricted by stanza's or pentameter. One thing though, I think it should be 'A hollow' rather than 'An hollow'. Excellent poem in a refreshing style.

So beautiful! I loved these lines:

The heart that expires its bloody tears cries its past, its love:
A set of futile memories which stroked its loathsome soul.

Keep writing. 5/5

I really liked this, you have a unique style unlike anything I've read before.

Thanx for commenting on my poems last time.. i can relate to this poem so much..short but meaningfull nice 5/5 for sure

Really lovely work. I liked the second stanza best - it really captured what you are talking about nicely. I also liked these lines 'The heart that expires its bloody tears cries its past, its love:
A set of futile memories which stroked its loathsome soul.' The imagery in these was very stong.

Great work, keep it up.

5/5
Darkest Wishes,
Matt

Wow... gawd the word choice really penetraed my mind... so deep and depressing... all i can say is AMAZING. i rated 5.