When?

Wow, that what im saying to myself, im gettin older, when that person will love me when i am happy.. i loved it.. gurl, u have a good thoughts. 5/5

Lookz Lyk you have a lot of comments already. And my opinion will be the same. Itz beautiful. Amazing! Well Written. Thanx for you comment! =)

I like this poem very much. what really appeals to me is the reoccuring line 'When will i find that person'. this poem is very passionate, emotional, creative, intelligent and heartfelt. keep writing, i look forward to reading more of your works

Brad

P.S. thanks for commenting on various poem of mine. your's, along with other people's comments help me to write better (i hope) lol. so thanks

Hey Tiffany! Nice job! Really enjoyed this one! Keep it up! Have u checked my new poems?

Love it. =)