Wow you sound so..uh...ha profeshional...good poem...some parts i didnt understand but tahts my loss and my stupidity....5/5

I didn't follow all of it, but i still injoyed it because i got the general idea.

Hey Mr. HansRik,
????? Ok, a little confusing but Good flow...no le entendi mucho pero creo que eres un burn poeta! So, I gave you 5/5, maybe you can explain it a little...^_^ but well, take care and keep writing poems.

Ok...hold on...not burn poeta...I meant buen poeta! I'm such a dork sometimes (lol)...well, I just write Spanglish! ^_^ hope you don't mind I call you a burn poeta...ops, sorry.

Very, very, nice!!!

Wow .... that was a very touchin poem.. i really loved it ... !!!

xox pixie