I love it!!!!!!!!! i love this poem sooo much!!! good really good!! i will give u a 5/5!!

Wow, that was great! I admire your writting skills so much. You put a bad thing and make it so that people understand their actions. You are truely the best writter here. (In my opinion anyways) And you are totally right, commiting suicide isnt the right thing to do. Nice Job Pal!

-Your Spanking Partner, Jennifer.

This is really touching you have worded it so good ur right thats not the way to die you really could learn something from your poems keep going with them keep giving people advice like this and you could be a councilor i love it

Damn this poem tight. I understand what your sayin to. Keep up the good work. 5/5.
~J.T.~

Besutiful poem Saint

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I think this is an ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL poem honey!!! truly one of the best poems i've ever read! very touching. totally loved it!

This is absolutely gorgeous! Though...I hope it's not true, life is precious! May God bless you and keep you always!

Amanda

This is great, Its a diffrent type of love poem and its a story also.
The flow was great and I loved the idea, so original and unique.
Well done this is excellent.

xD

Wow loved it...love dia mwaz xoxo

This is really beautiful
good job

This braught tears to my eyes. i had a similar situation.. Keep writing. Your great at it..

This is great. it really shows what you can do with a second chance