Beautiful poem. I loved the descriptions and images related to summer. Also the final message, of summer passing made a peaceful ending. Thanks for sharing.

Great write ! I love your metaphors which were so clear and simple as if I would be standing in a blooming garden looking around and seeing all those beautiful things going on, ther bees humming, the birds singing ... The second stanza is my fave one though the las two lines of the third stanza are oh so brilliantly written, giving this piece a perfect end . 5/5

Sorry for commenting on your work tardily, but this truly inspired me to write about nature again.

Thanx
Sabine

Very well done....

I was checking out your website and I saw this poem on there, so I had to check and see if you posted it here. I am glad you did so I could leave you a comment on it.

You have painted such a beautiful picture with your words. I really love this write, you are very talented......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Beautiful poem Simon.