Comments : A Fathers Betrayal

  • 19 years ago

    by Go Away Rain.

    This is a great poem, you can really feel the emotion and anger. I think you did a really wonderful job on this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*That was so0o0o good and i know how you feel....well written and thanks for voteing on my poem...means alot...*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Saddening to read this poem. You certainly have a right to be angry. Life comes at us hard at times and not always how we would like. Don't judge him to harshly though, through him you have become a pretty good Poet!
    Peace and Blessings

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacintha

    Great poem,
    only so sad.