I cant belive nobodys commented yet this is a very good poem.i cant wait to read more and if its not to much trouble could u comment on mine and see what i need improvement?o and keep up the good work

Yeah, I know love can be hard, it still is..... but ya know, that's life?
hey would you comment my other poems, Im gonna comment some more of urs and im gonna type some more aswell....and yah ill add yah on msn to kk? later though,
lol, yeah I think you are an amazing writer, but some suggestions to make it easier for people to read maybe you should put commors after each line and set it out line by line just to make it easier, cause its a bit hard and i no what u mean!!!!
i HATE IT when u love someone so much that you just cant hate them... even no u no that u should....
hard hey.....
=(
well good luck im gonna go and comment some more of ur poems
=D
u rock!
xx (fire)
my new name is this
hehe xx

My new name is And there was light
soz if u didnt get it
=D
xx