Awwwwww this is good, emotions, strong. good job

Awwl.. very nice.. and distrusting is hard to not do sumtimes,.. maybe you shouldnt blame yourself afterall. But overall very great job i loved your imagery it really got me interestd.. and you also had some great metaphors! keep up the awesome work. my pleasure xox britney

It was very good, i have a problem with not trusting my bf, its so hard and scary...
I dont know! i thought it was a really good poem!
well done and keep it up
xox Bam
Hippie person lol

5 stars for this one.. keep it up Emily!