Wow, this is, emotional. i really like this line
A memory I have
of Me, and yes mom, you.

those are good
good job

I like it alot. The words you used created vivid pictures. I feel like these two stanzas need a little work
"Fight after fight
consumes my memory
All of the hurt, the pain
it's all that I can see.

I know this was meant to be
and I don't regret any of this.
I'm dying as a symbol
that I wont be a miss."

the first stanza doesn't have a rhyme, and the rhyme on the second stanza sounds forced.
Good over all though

Awsome write. Sad subject though. Suicide is an unesasary consequence of other peoples cruelty. Well thats what I say atleast. This poem, aulthough it has short lines, has awsome flow. It sounds like you put a lot of thought and effort into it. Great work. You have an awsome talent. Keep writing. You're good at it. 5/5!

Well written Miss Katrina. Well written indeed. Choice words to bring the scene.

Aww wow hun, this is beautiful, you have some great talent there, I loved it & the way it flowed, very unique and beauitful, keep it up, lubb yew

The ending was a littñe predictable, but you made it sound very special, the story where you see all the bad, then suddenly you see all the good. That earnt you a 5.5! Very nice.

Good Writing!
beth

Nice poem, i like the ideas behind this poem. It's a beautifully written piece !!

XxX Cici XxX
(Still feeling ignored ?!) XxXxX

I was reading through this and i copied some a stanza i wanted to write here to tell you it was my favorite one but then i was like dang this ones really good too and so is this one i decided not to tell you which ones i liked because they were all actually really damn good. your a great writer, this is a really cool poem i loved it good job 5/5