I wasnt tryna be mean, really i wasnt. But with more exotic poems like that, it takes longer to get the full effect out to the reader. SO, with exotic/sex poems like that was, they normally are longer. But i do see what you're saying, hope you didnt take offense to it. And also, so you know, i'll be 17 next month...lol. Just thought you should know :)

This poem really stopped me from moving on. I had to read it three times because it touched me so deeply. Thank you Sock.