I don't know what to say.....I feel so bad for you, casue I feel your pain in your poems and I know exactly what you are going through....I know you don't cut, so please don't start that shi*...You'll never be able to stop again, trust me I KNOW!!!! My sweet Amanda, please talk to me, you know I'm your shoulder to cry on, I love you girl so much, you are my special friend!!! |
by Ann Stareyes
Amanda, |
by Sourav
It's a sad one! One can feel your pain! very sensitive poem. |
by James
Amanda.......that was so very good sad but good....sorry ur goin through this wish I could do something to help you....hang in there.....ur an awesome writter :) |
Heya, |
by Timothy B
What's going o these days girl? Talk to me. |
by Brian n Josh
Wow, i feel the exact same way, i couldnt have said it better myself |
I Like The Format Of This Poem, It Was Diffrent, I Admire The Style And I Must Say It Was Simply Beautiful 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by ValerieJg
The poem flowed pretty nice. I just think the last verse should be revised. Good job :) |
by Jordan
Really good poem. i know how you feel. very well written. keep it up mate. |
by Lalala
Wow this poem is great 5/5 |
I like that poem, i fell the same every day. keep writing |
by Kurt
Really conveys how much life's fangs can sting. Great job, and keep fighting. |
by emileigh
To tell the truth i am actually in love with this poem |
Very well done..I hope you're all right and I can identify with this poem. I hope you get through it as well as I can. |