by *faLLen aNgeL~* Sep 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I'm falling apart |
by Lori
Haha |
by Delie
Your poems are really great...just very short...try writing a lil longer and it could be even better !!! |
by Katlynn
I really didn't like this one much because it's a little to short and i don't like the ending of how you don't know like the only thing i know i don't know didn't make any sense. But the rest of the poem was alright. I think it should be like in a love part of Poems and Quotes but anyway i'm gonna give you a 4 but if you wanna change it up and stuff make it a little bit longer and make more sense from it. I know most of my poems don't make sense but that's how i see it in your poem wiht this one. But i'm not saying you bad because i'm not perfect at all. I'm saying just needs a little work. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |