Aww good poem!!!!!!!

Good one, there very good
Love
Stephen

Wow, awsome poem ashley. I loved it. keep up the good work.

~ItailanStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Ur very talented..keep up the fabulous work and take care...VERY GOOD POEM! : )

I want to thank you guys for your time that it took to read and comment
Thanks a lot
Ashley

I love it ashley its great better than mine

It was good, I'll be honest and say that the rhyme scheme was a little rough, it was good, but could have been worded a little better, but over all, it was a good poem.

Wow,
i think it has alot of meanings, not just a girl got rapped, it shows how awful is the world right at these moments,,etc

: )

Um it's ok.its kinda confusing though.good work tho.

Thank you all for your comments,
ive noticed some dont understand whats going on in the poem..its about a girl thats about to make a wish on a star..when a man grabs her..and no matter how hard she tried to fight him..he ended up killing her... thats what it means when it says "that poor girls mother was made to lay her daughter to rest".
thanks again
-Ashley

Very well written keep up the great work u got a 5/5 from me love yah hun