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by dustin Sep 5, 2005 category : Love, romance / lasting love
She wouldn't give me the time of day without her my life is gray Everyday I think about you I hope one day we can be two she finally loves me the same Now she wont think I'm lame She is my girl and I'm her man that's the way i wanted it to be Shes the best thing that could happen to me we have been going out for sometime I still cant believe that shes mine. Were older now it's the best We both lay together and die at rest Please place your vote
by A Heart Losing Hope
Simple and to the point, nicely done
by Gesselle Valle
Dustin, This is a really sweet and touching poem, I like it alot. 5/5 Hope you keep sharing more of your poems with us. Great job! Take care and God bless