"I didn't meant to broke your heart" is it supposed to be I didnt mean to break your heart? but overall good poem. 4/5

Wow.. awesome poem.. i dont know if i would be able to forgive a man for kissin my sister if he loved me. But he was drunk .. but still.. anyways great job thats a tuff situatuion to be in hope everything works out. great writing. 5/5

A few corrections :)
'I'll do anything to undone what I did'

should be undo, not undone.

Oops didn't mean to press submit yet.
'We where sitting in your friend's flat'
Should be were, not where.

Good poem though, well written other than a few simple mistakes. Flow could be improved, but it's a nice idea and I like how you wrote it from a different point of view.

Ouch, that was deep. but very well done. Usually in my writing I have a lot of trouble writing in a man's point of view, but you managed very well.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow is this something personal or something u thought up? sure wanna hear more.

Wow what a great poem! its so cool and sad...but well done...and keep writing!

Wow...This was different. besides a few mistakes, I would say great because you worked it....keep up the good work 5/5

Great poem. And that you can write it from a mans veiw was great!
it had a stoery which was interesting like a soap!! tehe.
Well done.xxx

Haha, that was awesome. like i said about one of your other works:
day-uhm.
i mean, thats just embarassing...