This is sad =(...it's really good....just short...like i said before, the more you write, the longer your poems'll get...at least that's what happened with me lol...everyone's different though....umm if you do start writing longer, you might want to add some more details to this, that would make it even better....sorry i'm rambling so much lol...anyways, keep up the great work and take care, i'm here if you need anything *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))