Oh wow...its so sad. i love you lol. aww it makes me wanna cry..tear. you an amazing writer

5/5 THIS I FEEL SO FAR OF WHAT I'VE READ....Is one of your best...Very very good. It's like the words Suicide Unnoticed just fit the rest of the poem perfect...Some people when They try to do that, it's very easy to spot out what they're trying to do. In all honesty, If you wouldn't have told me the words it spelt out I probably wouldnt have noticed you did it, Yet Got the same thought in my head. The whole poem flowed EXTREMELY WELL. Awesome Job.
_Ash_

Yea that poem was soo cool how you spelled suicide unnoticed was amazing cuz it just blended in with the poem lol your so geat at this... and question..?? I read some of your other poems and I was wondering how do you write such good stuff! it is really good