Vengence
by Carmen Sep 5, 2005
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I have only one thing on my mind... |
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17 years ago
Hm, at times I feltl ike it got rocky . But still a great piece of work . You didn`t just come out and say who you killed, and so and so . I liked that . The periods made pauses -- which added to the effect . Liked it .
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17 years ago
Very well written. the flow was very good. it was full of emotion and feeling. 5/5 keep up the good work.
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19 years ago
That was very good i loved the way you wrote it i like the way it had a twist at the end thought it might be her husband 5/5
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19 years ago
by Dark Kitten
WOW! That is so sad...... and it takes such a turn at the end. At first I thought it was the father. But then you get to the end and it is the brother. Excellent poem!
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19 years ago
by Jamie
I really hope this didnt happen i would go through stanzas and point out problems but someone has already done that so you dont need it again i think the form was a little odd sometimes your messed up the rhyme scheme but other then that great poem if its true which i doubt because your not in jail, your a great story writer and thats a talent that you should hold dear...good job...4/5
