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by Hard2Heal   Sep 5, 2005


I just don't know what to do anymore
i don't know what to say
i want all these feelings
to just go away

i try to put you out of my head
so i can forget all the pain
but something seems to always happen..
and then there you are again.

i saw you with your new girl
shes much prettier than i
its obvious that shes better
why else would u have said goodbye

it hurts knowing your doing with her
the things you did with me
the kisses and hugs, i miss so you so much
but thats something i cant let you see.

i always tried to be good for you
and do everything just right
so that i wouldn't have to experience something
like i did that night

but i guess i was all wrong
i messed things up so bad
i cant believe i lost you
you're the only one i had

now i must move on
and forget the past
find a new you..
and try to make it last

** sorry this is a bad poem, i always write to release my feelings, but this time.. i cant seem to get out just what i to say.. please, if you have any advice on how to improve my writing it would be appreciated so much thanks!!! **

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  • 19 years ago

    by amber

    Once again this is another great poem. . . . i know how it is to not git out what you really want to say and if that's the case do like i do. . . .just write it out on a piece of paper, don't worry about it rhyming or none of that. . .then go back and read over it and then you can put it in poetry form. It really really works. . .that's my advice

    Keep it up
    ~amber (lifetimecowgirl)

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this doesnt suck at all!! i really like it...i know wut ur goin thru *hugz* keep it up tho..you obviously deserve somebody better then him..by the way i seen ur comment on my site, thanx :P
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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