by Lisa Reed Nov 22, 2003
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A paradise is lost, |
Great! |
by Rachel
reading through your poems i have noticed u mainly stuck to one rhyming pattern y is this? maybe you should try a different pattern just for a change? |
by Danielle
Wow, that was truely brillian LIsa, I loved it! Very beautiful poem seriously, I hope that you always find time to submit yoru work on here. i love reading them...they always have meaning and you don't find that these days! |