Wow, that was truely brillian LIsa, I loved it! Very beautiful poem seriously, I hope that you always find time to submit yoru work on here. i love reading them...they always have meaning and you don't find that these days!

reading through your poems i have noticed u mainly stuck to one rhyming pattern y is this? maybe you should try a different pattern just for a change?

Great!
I like this poem as it has an easy , simple wording scheme that helps you feel it;s words.
well done