Very lovely and touching poem. Thanks for sharing. Read some of mine if you want.

Awesome,.. form was good and the wind-down conclusion worked well. The first line of the second stanza,.. id replace spell with one of its synonyms,.. and any other words that u dont think need to be repeated to keep the flow.. sometimes the repetition does help it, but variety is the spice of life.. ne way thats really my only suggestion,.. seems pretty solid thru and thru.. pZ