Written_In_Blood

by Kurt   Sep 6, 2005


I wrote for you a poem
I want for you to read it before
You ask about my scars

My hand a bloody bandage
You sit down beside me and open my letter.
Inside is a bloodstained sheet.
You open and read it without fear.

Tears stream down your cheeks
You wrap me in your embrace
You set the letter at our feet.
In your eyes i see a passion burning strong

In my heart i feel a passing of time and pain.
You keep holding me for i dont know how long.
It begins to storm and rain.
And your tears ease away all my pain.

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  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    An interesting read, it has some strong and some interesting lines. It keeps you in suspense, which is good and maybe there should be a part 2, that would certainly be interesting and I would love to read it if there was.
    One point is this line:
    "You open and read it without out fear."
    I don't think you meant to use "out" twice.
    You have an interesting and a unique style which is always refreshing and enjoyable to see.
    Keep writing, you have some good ideas.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marie

    WOW! That is more than words can say! It is a great great write. I think it could be even better is you made it longer. You know draw out make it more visual! But you did a great job on this keep it up!

    Marie

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