by keep n touch Sep 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
What pleasant weather the day has bestoyed |
by Falling Up
Wow... i love how desriptive your work is, and how u can still create flow and rhyme with everything.. its so creatively put togeather.. i wish i was that girl! i wish i could steal you so i could have your creativity! lol. well grrreeeat poem |
by aaron c s
I loved the flow and how each stanza was its own lil poem but all of them together made this one great poem. |
by FireCracker
OMG !! ' |
What a lovely poem! Tell me when you post more please :) |
by Goth
WOW... I could actually see what you were talking about, and the word play you used was awsome! 5/5 |