Okay! wow! You just made it onto my favorites list! That poem was amazing! I love your vocabulary and word usage. They are deffinatly one of your strong points. I also think it is amazing the way you paint the picture so vividly. Its almost as if you can see it all happening...and not just see it, feel it too. That was amazing. I hope you keep writing. You have such a great talent! 5/5!

I agree with katie you vocab and word usage is AMAZING my favorite part was when you said angelic mirage that sound like magic i love it, i really look forward to reading more of your work when you get it on here!!! 5*

This is really good, I like how disscriptive this is and the vocabulary is excellent. i'm guessing you're about 18? anyway, you frequently use the 'calm breeze', and such repeatitivness usually takes away from the poem, but this is an exception, great, 5/5

Very good writing add some more poems and i will be back

This is an enchanting piece! It's like a gentle breeze, very calming and serene! Your attention to detail paints a lovely picture!
I'm always in awe of free verse poetry. I haven't been able to master this style, though I've tried numerous times!
Anyhoo, beautiful poem! Keep them coming~Holly

Excellent. I agree with everyone else. You're vocabulary is amazing. You have a real talent for writing. One thing, what does bestoyed mean? Lol always looking to improve my own English :)
Incredible poem. Looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.

Wow what an amazing poem your good this is amazing for your frist post keep it up. i am sure the site will see good things froem you

Wow very well written and I love your choice of words

thanks so much for r/c on my poem

love always

Natalie

WOW... I could actually see what you were talking about, and the word play you used was awsome! 5/5

What a lovely poem! Tell me when you post more please :)

Thank you for the comment.

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I love it .. lol .. your vocab is absolutely excellent .. thanks for ur comment to by the way it was gr8 !

I loved the flow and how each stanza was its own lil poem but all of them together made this one great poem.

Wow... i love how desriptive your work is, and how u can still create flow and rhyme with everything.. its so creatively put togeather.. i wish i was that girl! i wish i could steal you so i could have your creativity! lol. well grrreeeat poem